Iamseeingmanymoreclientswhodescribestaying

非常不正确也。   因你采用中式直接变成西式啦 !

更正 :

I have seen many clients who are described as staying up a longer time later.

I am seeing many more clients who describe staying up later because they need alone time.        语法正确吗=======正确的  确保的意思是指 见如下==========

结果  1: 我看到更多的客户描述说晚睡是因为他们需要独处的时间。 

结果  2: 我看到越来越多的客户描述熬夜是因为他们需要独处的时间。